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My English Teacher
A freshman English teacher's observations and actions became a pivotal time of my life. I had received an F on a test about Romeo and Juliet. As the teacher handed me my paper, she said, " obviously, you did not read the assignment." I replied " yes I did but it was so boring." With a slightly angry voice she exclaimed, " Shakespeare is never boring and perhaps you could do better? "
I did not say anything more because I saw it was time for me to shut up. That very day after school, I went home and began re-writing the story of Romeo and Juliet. I was up until after midnight writing the story on how I thought it should be. My story was of Romeo and Juliet in 1970. I believe the story was about 14 pages when I finished.
The following day, I gave the story to my teacher. She had a very surprised look on her face as she said, " I will take it home tonight and read it." The very next day, she handed me my story and a big blue A- was at the top. She asked me if I would get up in front of the class and read it and noted for me to not read the curse words.
I read my story and the whole class laughed throughout the reading. Having Romeo and Juliet depicted as hippies was just too funny. After I finished, the teacher asked me if she could keep the story and I gave it back to her. As I handed the story to her, she smiled and whispered," Tom, you can be a writer." I can still see her face and can still hear her voice. I heard that years later, she would read my story to her college students.
One little moment of a whisper from a good teacher that I could be a writer changed my life from that day forward. I began writing poetry and songs. I learned to play the guitar because I loved writing songs. I found myself making money in bands throughout my early years.
Later in life I would move to Nashville and take my shot at the business. I mingled and wrote with great writers while learning with every step. It took six years for me to realize that I just couldn't write the way they wanted me to write. I left many good friends behind in Nashville and will always treasure the experience.
I co-wrote a song called "Sailing to the Port of Heaven" with a friend of mine from Nashville a while back. He recorded the song and released it on his album. He called me up one day and told me that a friend of his would play our song every day on his way home from work. His friend told him that the song gave him peace at the end of his tremendously stressful days at work. The man who played the song for peace was a Colonel in charge of wounded soldiers coming home from Iraq. The preceding story is just one of my favorite rewards of writing.
I think of my English teacher often when I write. I did track her down recently and thanked her. She did remember me and told me that she had wondered about me over the years. It was great to hear that she was still teaching! I believe that a student must show promise through effort before a teacher can recognize the talents of a student. She recognized that I had some talent in writing and she acted upon it by telling me so. She cared enough to see it and say it. If she hadn't, you wouldn't be reading my story.
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It only takes one great teacher to change the course of a life. In my second semester of college I had an English prof named - I kid you not - Sheryl Crow, who'd put my assignments and those of two others at the bottom of the pile to be graded. Not because they were bad (as I assumed), but because (she said) they were her reward for suffering through the pitiful offerings of students who weren't concerned with having a GPA over 2.0. The theme for the class that year was "Sense of The Sixties". She was so impressed by my term paper on the Viet Nam war that she asked permission to use it in future classes. Wasn't the least bit surprised when I admitted I didn't start writing that A+ gem until the day before it was due, then finished it in two hours. A testament to her "Just write!" exercises in the first week of class.
Good teachers change people's lives forever, and for the better. Glad to hear you got in touch with her again!
Yes! I had a similar experience. My teacher wrote on my paper "Girl, you can write-- now if you could only spell." I was so glad that he thought writing was more important than spelling.
It is a real thrill to be able to reconnect after many years, glad you got that experience, too. Sometimes it is hard to realize how much those little moments can mean to a kid. Great story.
Rochelle Frank wrote "Yes! I had a similar experience. My teacher wrote on my paper "Girl, you can write-- now if you could only spell." I was so glad that he thought writing was more important than spelling."
lol, I had a teacher say almost those exact words to me last semester in a Lit-220 class. In my case Man, and a rebuke for not adding some required sources, but other than those minor variations, pretty much the same message. Like each of you, this guy had a profound impact on my writing, and is one of the reasons I am here. All hail the educators!
Now why don't you take this talent and write a book, I, for one, would read it and recommend it to friends. You really know how to make mundane things interesting. In the grand scheme of things, who would care about your life, or most peoples for that matter. But the way you tell about these events, makes for some very interesting reading. Keep it up.
Being a teacher myself I was glad to read your hub making a memory of your teacher. As far as I know teachers are not the richest members of society but these moments worth doing the job. It is just like applauding to actors at the theatre.
Thanks, Tom.
Thanks Tom Cornett for sharing this piece of your life. This must be a thank you story to your English teacher who then inspired and touched you. Really, teachers can affect our future lives and that the lives we now live are expressions of gratitude, respect and honor for them.
You were indeed fortunate to have an english teacher who encouraged you. Many pupils end up coasting along until a teacher intervenes with words of praise.



























Cris A Level 2 Commenter 3 years ago
Another nice vignette (sheesh, i'm all over your hubs i'm running out of good things to say!). I think each one of us has a Mr Chips in our lives. Thanks for sharing another great story. :D